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Thursday, 4 June 2015

4/06/2015 SL Speed write THE BLAZING STAR

[THE BLAZING STAR]


[Introduction]
Once when the Sun is so hot it can sustain thermonuclear fusion. Overall, new stars born in the centre of nebulae. Protostars are about 2 million degrees fahrenheit in our solar system. In space there is a lot of billions of blazing light. Stars are the same temperature like us, the people that lives in space. Gravity puts pressure on clouds of dust and gas ( nebulae ). In center of nebulae, nuclear fusion occurs and this is when


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What are stars?
As long as a star has hydrogen to “burn” it so it can keep it shining. Some stars are tiny because they are a huge distant away from Earth. Orion is visible from New Zealand in summer and autumn but it’s below the horizon the winter and spring. The giant star may have disappeared from sight bat it’s gran remain. A star is a massive bright, sphere of a very hot gas called plasma which is held by  its own gravity! They are most easily recognised as a part of star groupings called constellations. By the time our Sun has reached this “red giant” stage, it will have expanded right out past Mars.

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The Life Cycle of a Star.
When a star is born there is a constant battle between the core of the star nuclear fusion is it’s rope and called equilibrium which means it’s the main sequence. The clumps of the gas, they form what astronomers called it a protostar. Stars are born in a great cloud of hydrogen gas and dust called nebulae. An exploding star is three times larger than the Sun, will leave behind a core about 25 kilometers (15 miles across). Hot is enough to turn gold like our Sun, but it shine for much longer. A milky way galaxy has over 200 billion  size of a Frisbee.

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Type of Stars
The force of gravity inside is so intense that nothing can escape it, hot and even light. Stars seem to be fixed in the sky and different timed. The biggest stars is discovered by the astronomers is the VY canis majoris.Our Sun is a middle-sized star. The Sun will shine about 10 billions years. One of the smallest known stars in our galaxy is a VB10. Did you know that rigel ( star ) is 20,000 degrees, it’s 40,000 times brighter than the Sun! Protostars come after Nebuler the gas that comes is out of the Sun. Most Stars are too small to shine as bright as the Sun. There is a

[Conclusion]

My Information Report Success Criteria:
Self
Peer
My heading/title:


  • is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)


My opening paragraph/introduction:


  • says what my report is about in a clear way


  • gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification


  • outlines the main features of the subject


My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:


  • have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)


  • are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject

  • give detailed information (factual descriptions)


  • include specific, technical vocabulary


  • are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)


  • may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information

My end paragraph/conclusion:


  • draws the report together/sums up my main points


  • may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Shahid,
    Well done on finishing your speedwrite within the 40 minutes.

    Your next learning steps are:
    1) Finishing off your sentences and making sure your paragraphs are about ONE main idea.
    2) You need to proofread your work and correct any errors to further improve your work and make sure that your paragraphs make sense. I suggest you read your writing aloud and see which parts don't really make sense.

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